Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Blog 10 The intellegence is lost at sea

It was a shiny day Ralph and piggy put on there best cloths same with Sam and Eric. IT looked like the same and Eric were going to a business to do work or get a job. They were walking to castle rock. They went to the bright is Roger said who goes there. We said It is us Sam....and Eric Roger said so it is I am not aloud to let you in so go away. Then right then Jack said we have spears and we will kill you. Roger said who cares we have Jack. We said he is not here. Then Roger pointed into the Jungle it was Jack. Then Jack said your going to kill you. Then Ralph said not if we kill you first. Then Ralph and Jack was spear fighting we where taken up for hostage. and we were tied up by Jack hunter piggy was standing there and there was a trap that was going to kill someone that cam to close to castle rock. Piggy came closer and closer then Roger pulled the lever the big rock hit him he went flying off a cliff of 40 feat his head spit and his brain came out then the water dragged out into sea. Then Ralph ran as fast as he could a far way from Jack place. We were on the wall Jack said to us come and join my tribe or die.

4 comments:

Gala said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
Gala said...
This comment has been removed by the author.
Gala said...

Hey.
That is a very good title for this blog. You just forgot to put what blog it is.
You said almost everything but you could have add more.
You could add more detail. And remember to spell check.
Otherwise,
Good Job.

Hungry Langston said...

Yo

I liked to title to your blog. You could add more. But i liked it. Very cool blog, You didn't mess up on the sam and eric part.