Friday, February 1, 2008

Blog 3 "We Need Help!!!!""

I like it when it is all dark and scary.There were many Festoon around the tree's. I wascold and trendril.This is good. I can see the poop marks .It was just fresh because I like sticking my finger in the poop. I can tell it been here about 5 min ago I have to catch up to the pig to kill. Then I saw Ralph and Simion I asked for water he did not answer. I was not inscrutable.He was bewilder. I ask again then he told me it is over there. I was tired of working . I need a break. No, I need meat must kill. Then I walked away and then realized I needed more water I said to Ralph Hi and flaunt. Then Ralph and i were fighting who should be oppressive.I strew my barb weapon on the ground.When he threw his wepon at the ground the tip of his weapon glittered in the sand. Simon was furtive and did not want to get in the arguement so he left.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I get the jist of the story but the "many Festoon around the tree's. I wascold and trendril.This is good. I can see the poop marks" just need to work on sentence structure and the vocab. use m-w.com to look for word defenitions.

Mr. Shaddox said...

Willie,
Your journal captures the essence of Jack's thoughts in this chapter.

REVISION: Please rewrite sentences for the following words. Check for usage of these words in the book. Perform a google search for your word to investigate its usage.

festoon
tendril
bewilder
flaunt
oppressive