Monday, February 25, 2008

Blog 8 The treible accident

It was a scary moment looking at the pigs head it was super scary I keep on talking to the pig but the pig head was not answering back. I was very discourage. I had to see if the beast was real I had to see it with my own eyes. It was still on the mountain and kept of moving back in forth. I climbing up the mountain very slowly and then I saw it was caught on some rock I unhook the beast from the rock ready to run it kept on going back and forth then I looked at it closely and I realized that it was a parachute and a person. It kept on moving back and forth. Then I said what is there to be scared of I can tell them there is no beast and everyone will be happy and we will join together with Jack tribe again. Then I saw a fire and it was on the beach but I could not explain it. It was like they were having a party I trickle down the mountain to tell the other while I was running down the parachute left the top of the mountain and floated to another place. Everyone at the party was tremulous. I went to where the noise where coming from It was like they were killing something and cooking it. I was steadfast of where the noises were coming from. Maybe they are cooking pig. Then when I got to there party I was tackled and I was having people more and more people I was trying to say that I am not the beast and there is no beast it was a parachute. No, more and more people keep on chanting the same thing and jumping on me if I was the beast. It was a corruption. Then I felt people ripping my skin off I yelped. Then I died I was pushed into the water and that is where I belonged and I drifted out to see not to be seen again

2 comments:

Gala said...

Hey.
I think you could add more detail in your blog and make it longer. In your title you spelled terrible wrong so you might want to fix that.

Hungry Langston said...

YO
This blog was ok. this time it was long enough so thats better.you spelled the beginning wrong.