It was a great day for flying in the sky but a storm was coming in. Other kids were vainly talking about how they looked. I went to sleep for five minutes because I was very tired. The next thing I knew, the plane was on fire. I was scared and fainted. I woke up on some nice soft sand so it was like I was in heaven. I was crambing on the sand. I got up and started to play in the lagoon. I also started to devour some water. Then when I was playing in the water, I heard a loud noise it sound like an elephant. It also sounded a little strident. I slowly walked to where the noise was coming from. I was quivering in fear. It was two boys blowing on a shiny object. I did not know what it was. I walked quicker because I hadn't seen a human since I passed out. I walked very decorous because the Fat kid and the skinny kid saw me. I walked very decorous because I wanted to be known as a civilized person. The Fat kid asks me my name. I said Bob. I interposed between the fat kid and the person with the shiny thing. Then some other people were already there like Johnny. I said hi and sat down. I started to speculate, about the shiny object asking myself what is that, and why is he blowing it. Then other people came and more it was like a assembly at school. Everyone jumbled up together. Then when a lot of people were there everyone was clamber. Then we heard something marching at us I could not see it well but it look like it was a marching army with uniforms I thought we were saved but when the people got close they were not to much taller then me. Then a kid pallor to the ground. It looked like he died. But he just fainted. They called him Simon. Then they jumbled together for a meeting to see if this is an island and who should be chief. We voted Ralph as chief. Then Ralph picked two people to go with him to find if this is an island or another continent. He had to pick 3 people he pick Jack big tuff guy Simon and himself. Fat kid was complaining and indignation. Fat kid also named Piggy said Ralph. Piggy was very grating. Then the kid went to search to island.
Thursday, January 24, 2008
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I like how you used similies througout yourblog like
Example:
"I woke up on some nice soft sand it was like I was in heaven."
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