Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Blog 2 The great responsiblity


In this chapter When they were coming down from the mountain they heard a squealing it sounded like a pig it was but small one it was warping the vine. Jack tried to kill it but missed then he said while he was coming down the mountain that he will kill the next pig that crosses him again. He was also very officious. I was nervous and was all in fright. When the 3 of the came back I ask them they shake there head because we were on a island there was no don’t about that. Even everyone new that before they left. Then Ralph said I making it fun and we have to have rules. Then I said that a little kid name Johnny Bob friend saw a beasty and he saw at night they argued that there is a beasty then Jack said if there is a beasty I will hunt it with my hunters everyone was happy except for Ralph that knew there was no beast then. He realizes that he was getting on the good side of the kids. Then Ralph added that his dad new where this island is so being would be saved. Everyone was scornfully happy. People were very irresistible too after hearing all that. Then Jack said let make a fire then a tumult of people ran for the mountain. While I carried the conch to the top of the mountain. Ralph and my face were nimble.

1 comment:

Emma Christenfeld said...

Willie-
You need some spell checking and some rephrasing. Apart from this, good job.
-Emma